T2+Explain

__Wednesday 1 June__

The scene of a crime is where well a crime happened like a shooting,murder etc. After the crime has been committed there is sectwents of events.



**MY LEARNING TARGETS**

My next step in writing is to elaborate on my ideas so that the reader gets the full picture of what I am trying to explain e.g. "Hard or easy you must keep any secret that your friend tells you, this is what it means to be a good friend".

I will achieve this by going over my writing and pretending I have never read it before to see if I have explained all the details. Proof read and edit my writing carefully.

Date achieved: //Mrs Stock//

__Tuesday 11 May 2011__

L.I. We are learning to use words that contain cause & effect. S.C. My writing
 * will use words like because, as a result of, therefore

**What does it mean to be a good friend?**

Friends are people that you can laugh without any care around, can talk to without any fret and over all just be yourself. If you are a result of all these things you should be a good friend. Like most people any friend come in different shapes, sizes, races and personality. Either way you both accept you for who you are.

Keeping secrets can be a hard or easy thing to do depending on the secret. Hard or easy you must keep that secret. If you don’t the friend may become mad or even lose that friendship.

Be yourself and smile a lot. Smiling is a key representation of your personality. If you are meeting a person for the first time and greet them with a smile you are showing that you are friendly. Smiling makes you think the person is quite happy, we as frowning makes you seem dull and very boring but if you want that representation thats fine. Don’t try to change yourself just to gain a friendship because in the long run you’ll probably end up hating them or getting dragged around to everything they want to do.

Try to finding things in common, so there is something interesting or funny to talk about.

Keeping a secret can be a hard or easy thing to do. Even if the secret you have been told is silly and you have a urge to tell someone, you must not for if you do your friendship will be over and you will never be able to fix it.



__Wednesday 4 May 2011 __

L.I. We are learning to use the structure of explain to give an explanation of what light is and to use present tense. S.C. My writing
 * has a general statement at the beginning
 * is sequenced in time order or clearly explains in a logical order
 * is written in present tense

Light is radiation that is visable to the human eye. They say the speed of light is like a vacuum or empty space and is around 299,792,458 meters per seconds but nobody really knows the exact amount. Light is made up of particles just like you and me, these particles tho are photons which are found in most electronic things.